Hello Jill and all,

I very much enjoyed reading your revised paper - and particularly liked the way you established the context at the beginning, with your 'Objectives/Purpose'. Also, you were focusing on the issue of integrating individual and collaborative inquiries, and the transformational learning that can be achieved through paying attention to the nature of the influencing relationship between these - very much a research interest of mine at the moment!

I have made just a few minor editing suggestions, but otherwise, I think this is a very interesting account, well worth publication.

Best wishes,

Joan