Hi Moira
Thank you for having a another look at my paper. I have corrected diary (!) and adjusted the margins. The spelling errors that are being highlighted now are American spellings of words. Is it ok to leave as English? I hope so. I am attaching the new version and understand that it will now be proof read again by other members of the editorial board prior to publication.
Thank you for your guidance - this is a new experience for me!
Best wishes
Sally