I have found your comments and ideas about my work very useful and have adapted my work as requested.
I understand the need for clarity around some of the included concepts and have clarified points where you have found anomalies or vague statement. I trust I have done this to a sufficient extent.
I have included more data around my claims to knowledge but have increasingly realised that this is a work in progress and so look forward to a greaterÂ data bank as the work proceeds from which I might generate meaningful and significant evidence. This submission is very much in line with my best thinking so far and I live in the faith that both my thinking and work will both increase and improve with time.
I trust that you will find the work now suitable for publication and look forward to hearing from you.
With many thanks