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e-poster: A narrative of an educator and an extraordinary theory

 
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Re: e-poster: A narrative of an educator and an extraordinary theory
by Mark Potts - Tuesday, 27 November 2018, 2:23 PM
 

Swaroop

Thank you for re-presenting your poster. I can see that you have addressed the issues raised after the first iteration and I think that it is considerably stronger as a result. There are some simple edits required:

"In this poster I want to illustrate the story of an educators and an interesting theory. The educator I am discussing here are Mohandas"

Should it be?

In this poster I want to illustrate the story of an educator and an interesting theory. The educator I am discussing here is Mohandas.

Also, "In my life skills education through drama class it would be contrary to my values to take any actions" Add "be".

Other than these minor edits and the acknowledgements I am of the view that it is ready for publication.

Best wishes

Mark P