Thanks for your email. Yes i realized that some evidences became very lengthy especially the letter genre that i reduced as i could do it without losing its essence. I am working on all the issues you including Sigrid and Moira have raised.
I hope this makes sense of how a writer/living theorist can improve his/her account. I really appreciate and acknowledge your (reviewers) efforts and contributions in enabling me to improve my learning through such kind of engagements.
with best regards