Hi, Robyn. I hope that you feel that the revisions have strengthened the article. I find it much clearer and appreciate your thoughtfulness in the clarifications.
Your work is very important and your willingness to research your practice and share with the world is of utmost significance.
I am pleased to say that in my humble opinion this article is ready for publication.
Thanks for sharing, Robyn. Best wishes in your contributions to improving our world.